whAT a great poem. loved it and emailed my friends.
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As i looked in the woods i heard a big crash....
then comes running hellbilly with a big old red rash......
i looked at him laughing thinking it was a joke......
Looks like dave wiped , his asss with a leaf of poison oak!
Feeling bad i laughed, as he stood..
thats the reason why i dont, crap in the woods........
GREAT :proud
.... NICE>. continue/////
As i looked in the woods i heard a big crash....
then comes running hellbilly with a big old red rash......
i looked at him laughing thinking it was a joke......
Looks like dave wiped , his asss with a leaf of poison oak!Feeling bad i laughed, as he stood..
thats the reason why i dont, crap in the woods........As it was time to head out for the evening hunt I heard Carlos weeping and complaining he could not hunt,When we inquired why he said his socks got wet and told Scott to take him to walmart as he wept saying Florida is for real hardcore hunter its not like this were I come from in Jersey
that don't rhyme man! lol
.... NICE>. continue/////
As i looked in the woods i heard a big crash....
then comes running hellbilly with a big old red rash......
i looked at him laughing thinking it was a joke......
Looks like dave wiped , his asss with a leaf of poison oak!Feeling bad i laughed, as he stood..
thats the reason why i dont, crap in the woods........As it was time to head out for the evening hunt I heard Carlos weeping and complaining he could not hunt,When we inquired why he said his socks got wet and told Scott to take him to walmart as he wept saying Florida is for real hardcore hunter its not like this were I come from in Jersey
that don't rhyme man! lol
Nope but funny as hell. anyway if it dont fit in your storyline theme good enough just delete it,wont hurt my feelings never claimed to be a shithouse poet
haha.. na its cool..!!
ok guys continue ...................
